Heidi Wootton, charcoal drawing of meat, 1 hour

heeeeey this is my charcoal drawing wich i did for around an hour, we were drawing raw meat which was plonked on a try infrount of us :) before we did this drawing we did some quick 1 - 5 min drawings so we could explore different textures without thinking about the detail too much, this meant we could add this to our detailed work. at first i wasnt really happy with the composition of this drawing, it didnt fill the page very well, however i edited it on photoshop and cut out a bit of the page and adjusted the lightness and the contrast, and now i think it works well. if i could do anything to improve this piece i would have added more detail and included more delicate strokes to emphasise the shininess of the meat, and to make it look more realistic over all.